Pages

Thursday, April 23, 2020

Desert island.

By at

6 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 23, 2020 at 2:07 PM

    This story is creative. Maybe next time you could use more dialogue

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousApril 23, 2020 at 2:10 PM

    This story is very cool and creative but the next story you write add some more dialogue

    ReplyDelete
  3. AnonymousApril 23, 2020 at 2:14 PM

    nice planning but next time more detail:)

    ReplyDelete
  4. AnonymousApril 23, 2020 at 2:15 PM

    Good plan Mariah - would love to read it once you have actually written it out.

    ReplyDelete
  5. AnonymousApril 23, 2020 at 2:33 PM

    Great Job Mariah I adore your creativity. Maybe next time Mariah add some more detail and use more dialougues Keep it up!

    ReplyDelete
  6. AnonymousApril 24, 2020 at 11:46 AM

    good job mariah i love your creativity in your work but next time maybe add some dialogues and more detail

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)