Hello people I am doing a song for SLJ and please comments on this blog thx...
This is the link to my Step is up
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teacher is Mr Janse
I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teacher is Mr Janse
Kia ora Harmony. "straight ahead we go to the beach". This was my favorite line from your post as it reminded me of how much I like the beach. I enjoyed listening to your recording too. Looking forward to hearing the next remix. Mr Winter from Manaiakalani
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Renee and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey Team. Ka pai on writing this awesome song and recording yourself using Screencastify. This means that you have completed both the “Step It Up” and “Kick Start” aspects of this activity and will earn extra points towards your Summer Learning Journey tally.
Also, the quality of this post is so fantastic I am awarding you even more extra bonus points! You are a really talented songwriter - have you been writing music for long? Do you have any tips for other bloggers that might like to start songwriting like you?
The lyrics of your song really remind me of a kiwi Christmas with the references to the beach and visiting there with whanau to share a meal.
I can’t believe it is Christmas tomorrow - I am so excited! Ngā mihi nui and keep up the excellent mahi - I can’t wait to see your other posts over the summer.
Renee (SLJ)